In literature we have to write a poem like one we had read in class. In my case I choose "Coming Home"
My mother is stressed after a Long day,
Asking about how it goes at school,
We said: Today was a Boring day.
Getting at home after a Long day is the best for all.
We get at home and she prepare the snack.
I start playing with the celphone,
while my mother is telling me to do homework,
I said later and then i'm very tired.
Although my mother always has an stressed day at work and when que get home,
She always with a smile un her face helping us.
At night everyone sitting at table for dinner sharing time.
That's the best part of fue day.
Good work Joaquín! Your poem may be too narrative, but it´s still very descriptive and detailed.
ResponderEliminarHow about including some metaphors and similes next time?
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