In literature we reed three poems with different topics. After that we had to choose one topic and write a poem. The topic I choose is:
-Love according to our personal point of view.
Love is a distraccion for life,
Thinking about another person all the time.
Love are discussions and happiness
But always another person matters for you
Love have good and bad things
There's always a chance of getting hurt
But you do not realize until ir happens.
Good things are always present
Jokes, laughs, the nice moments together
People have different perspectives of love
You can care more for the other one or for yourselfe
Honestly I worry more for the other one than for my
Excellent work Joaquín. You´ve written an honest, reflective poem.
ResponderEliminarIn the last line, the final word should be "myself" instead of "my". That way it is gramatically correct and it also rhymes.
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